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    Thema: Gedanken einer verlorenen Seele
Vampire_87hab mal angefangen gedichte zu schreiben und werde meine ersten versuche jetzt mal hier rein stellen.
ist nichts besonderes und bin noch nicht so gut darin.
über meinungen und kritiken würde ich mich sehr freuen, um zu sehen, wass ich besser machen kann.

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Vampire_87I walk through the city
It’s middle of the night
No one seems to notice
That I don’t feel right

Look to the ground
Tears fill my eyes
As I walk through the streets
Of the cold and lonely night

I lay on the ground
And no one seems to see
All that’s left to find
Is just a shadow of me

Think of packing my bags
Of leaving tonight
Would like to do
What I think is right

Want to follow my heart
To go my own way
And try to let my dreams bekome reality
Vampire_87Cold and empty
So much memorys
Of all the thinks
That happened once
And now are past

Everithing changes
Because of mistakes
We don't want to realize
And lock away

Dark and silend
Just a slow wind
Coming through the window
Which is broken now

Still I sit here
Remind all my fear
Try to understand
Why this is happening
Vampire_87If I'm lost
to many ways
it's getting dark
will you be there to find me?
light up the forest
and bring me back home?

If I'm falling
like an angel
with broken wings
will you be there to cath me?
care for me
and make my fly again?

If I'm scared
ghosts everywhere
want my soul
will you be there to protect me?
wake me up
and tell me that I'm dreaming?

If I'm broken
tears on my face
rain in my heart
will you be there to pic up the peaces?
take me in your arms
and heal my pain?

If I'm down
don't know how to go on
want to die
will you be there to rescue me?
reach out for my hand
and bring me back to life?

Will you be there, whatever may come?

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